Doing some Peer critiquing
Peer Reviews from UX Collective For this weeks reading we continued reviewing each other's chapter drafts we have updated. My Comments: I reviewed Judy's work this week. My comment for Judy My Triads Comments: Judy then offered some feedback on how to make my sentences flow a bit better, and make them more professional sounding. Judy's comment on my paragraph about writing Her comment helped me realise some small changes I could make to help give my chapter a more professional feel by just rephrasing some sentences. I'll definitely keep a sharp eye on making sure my sentences flow just as well throughout the whole chapter. This is an outro.
