Doing some Peer critiquing
For this weeks reading we continued reviewing each other's chapter drafts we have updated.
My Comments:
I reviewed Judy's work this week.
My Triads Comments:
Judy then offered some feedback on how to make my sentences flow a bit better, and make them more professional sounding.
Judy's comment on my paragraph about writing
Her comment helped me realise some small changes I could make to help give my chapter a more professional feel by just rephrasing some sentences. I'll definitely keep a sharp eye on making sure my sentences flow just as well throughout the whole chapter.
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